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White Rose, Iris FieldWhite Rose, Iris Field               11/19/09  Waiting for Love in a Field of Hope  By Devin Kruljac Truessence   
Somewhere in the world,  There is a field full of iris flowers,  Where the sun kisses every petal,  And the soil is warm and fertile.   
In this field of white,  There is a man, gentle and kind,  Waiting for a white rose to bloom,  So he may be lucky enough to cherish it.   
This rose has shown before,  To other people passing the field,  And each time it is the same,  And White Rose, Iris Field
by ~truessence
Wake to an Endless DreamWake to an Endless Dream  10/07/09  By Devin Kruljac Truessence   
Can you dream an endless dream,  Of infinity with magenta skies?   
A seamless end to never end,  A loving voice to laugh and cry?   
To find what you yearned to find,  And see the life inside you still,  To reach across the unknown wind,  To smile forever and wait until,  You realize that there’s much to love,  And love unto you—a stronger will,  As if the heavens themselves blessed your way,  And filled your heart with such a thrill?   
Can you wake to be awake, &nbs Wake to an Endless Dream
by ~truessence
Smile in the RainSmile in the Rain  09/14/09  By Devin Kruljac Truessence   
So fades away another frown,  Despite the rain now pouring down.  With the highest of hopes, the pillars gone, I’ll smile when I drown.   
It’s good that I’ve just made a friend,  These waters don’t scream, just pretend,  Better to have gained something, than have had nothing, in the end.   
They all say laughter cures the pain,  So I’ll find my way through this bane.  Because of this water--too deep to swim-- I’ll wait for it to drain.   
The waves won’t stop, I fi Smile in the Rain
by ~truessence
You'll Learn to Smile againYou’ll Learn to Smile Again   09/13/09  By Devin Kruljac Truessence   
And sign yourself, a river dancing,  A child laughing, a waterfall in your heart.   
Despite the waves, a flower blooms,  Love assumes, that you’re never out.   
And though you’re far, I can hear the beat,  Feel the heat, driven from way within.   
So now you cry, the tears never stop,  They always drop, let the sun come in.   
For here we are, keep on moving,  Keep on blooming, this rose will never wilt.   
I can see it now, the skies are blue,  You You'll Learn to Smile again
by ~truessence
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NEED HELP WITH POETRY CONTEST! :D

Tue Nov 10, 2009, 5:04 PM
  • Mood: Excited
Okay guys, my college is hosting it's own Poetry Contest. I don't care about the small prize of 50 dollars to a book store (as much as I would love buying a new book) but rather having another one of my poems being published in hopes that maybe someone would take an interest in it. Not only that, but if I got 1st place, I'd be able to read it in front of the entire campus in front of the students who decide to show up. THE DEADLINE IS NOVEMBER 30TH.

Right now I have 6 poems I want to choose from. What I need from you guys is to rate each poem to see which one-

1. Sounds the best
2. Touches you the most
3. Has the best form.

Rate them from 1 through 10, 1 being lowest, 10 being the highest. Be as critical as you possibly can, it'll only help me.

Here are the poems:

1. Ah
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2. When Tremors Wane
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3. A Walk Through Skylight
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4. Awe
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5. An Iris in the Morning Beam
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6. A Childhood Memory
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Please leave a comment with your ratings to each poem, which one you think I should submit, and, if you wish, a comment as to why you chose it.

I appreciate the help so much, guys. I'd just be happy enough to get another one of my poems published.

Love you all.

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  • Current Residence: Wherever I go, there I am.
  • Interests: Poetry, Love, singing, acting, reaching out to others, Nature.
  • Favourite movie: Notebook, Princess Mononoke, Howl's Moving Castle, V for Vendetta, Transformers, The Matrix.
  • Favourite band or musician: Killswitch Engage, Katatonia, Dir en grey, Nightwish, Linkin Park, Serj Tankian
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock, Heavy Metal, Techno, Alternative, Opera, Classical
  • Favourite artist: Rain King.
  • Favourite poet or writer: William Wordsworth, Henry David Thoreau, Jane Yolen, John Saul.
  • Operating System: Pen and Paper
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod
  • Shell of choice: The one my soul is encased in.
  • Skin of choice: My Love's soft and warm skin.
  • Favourite game: Tales of Symphonia, DDR, SSBM, Halo, FF7, Dirge of Cerberus, Ragnarok Online.
  • Favourite gaming platform: Playstation 2, PC, Game Cube.
  • Favourite cartoon character: Knuckles the Echidna, Ed (from Ed, Edd, and Eddy), Shin (from Shin-chan), Gaara, Chad (from Bleach).
  • Personal Quote: "Close your eyes, only then may you begin to truly see."
  • Tools of the Trade: Love, Loved Ones (Friends & Family), Nature, Inspiration, Spirituality, Life.

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:iconlenora:
~lenora Sep 25, 2009, 7:34:33 PM
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found this in a folder and it was named "krash" but i cannot figure out what i was drawing for you lol possibly your old gaia avatar? anyway hope you like it :p

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~DustyNovaRocks Sep 22, 2009, 11:31:08 PM
You're welcome by the way :D
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~DustyNovaRocks Sep 22, 2009, 11:16:42 PM
Thank you so much for the watch! :hug:
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=andaria Aug 26, 2009, 7:33:25 AM
Thank you! :thanks:
I really appreciate your support :huggle:

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~truessence Aug 28, 2009, 10:01:31 PM
You're more than welcome. ^_^

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"Close your eyes,
Only then may you begin to truly see."
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~eizu May 27, 2009, 4:45:52 AM
    Thank you so much for the :+devwatch: It's highly appreciated :hug:


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~truessence May 27, 2009, 12:24:32 PM
No problem. ^_^

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"Close your eyes,
Only then may you begin to truly see."
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~xXxAm0rEM0rtexXx May 26, 2009, 2:18:49 PM
I'm stalking you Devin.. /gg
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~truessence May 26, 2009, 6:11:58 PM
EVIL! XD Kidding.

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"Close your eyes,
Only then may you begin to truly see."
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Mood: Love ~xXxAm0rEM0rtexXx May 28, 2009, 1:53:21 PM
xD Chu know you love eet. <3
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